character creation

name: cyrus
Age: 15
gender male
description: eyes are red skin is brown height 5'7 black hair red baseball cap jeans black shirt blue jacket white joggers black gloves green backpack.
hometown: pallet town
personality: he is a brilliant kid he does really cool stuff
like skateboarding down hills jumping over lakes
and flying on fearows. and he works really well
with others. he even helps old ladies get around.
pokemon team: squirtle

Hello and welcome newmember, I've seen your application and just wondering if you could make your application a little more indepth explaining more about your character. Also things need to be MORE than one line and using descriptive words especially in your description and personality. Your history needs to include what has already happened in your character's life and really get into your character yourself so you can find more about him to add to this wonderful application so far. So do those edits and I'll get back to you!
THANKS
Lazerus
Co-Owner
Dwell solely ON the postiive energy within your very own self!