Mcclm09's Character

Name: Major Lee

Age: 10
Gender: Male
Description: Major has brown hair and eyes. His favorite color is blue. He likes to wear a jacket, even in the heat. He can't leave behind his orange converse. He rarely changes clothes. He's 4 ft 8.
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Hometown: Major used to live in Pewter City, but came to Pallet Town, to get his first pokemon.

History: Major's parents died in a bombing made by Team Rocket. They were great trainers. Major moved from Vermillon City, to Pewter City, so he could live with his brother, Michel. He came to Pallet Town for a month, just to see the other citys. He decided to get his pokemon from the professor.

Personality: Major is very quiet and shy. But he isn't scared of anything. He and his pokemon will fight to the end. e gets along with most people. When he hears the name, "Team Rocket". He goes crazy almost. He will calm down though.

Pokemon Team: Here the pokemon Major will have. Not all of them, but this is the oder. Please tell me whcih ones are ok.
1) Happiny lv5 attacks~pound, and charm
2) Bulbasaur lv5 attacks~tackle, and growl
3) Mime Jr lv5 attacks~tackle, and charm

I have read and given thought on your application and....

+NEEDS EDITING+

These are a few suggestions in which I will recommend to you to do...
1.) Give more description to your character you can leave the picture there though!
2.) Have a full history and a backstory of ANY pokemon your character has!
3.) Personality needs to be longer!
4.) You can only reserve ONE POKEMON if everything is really good then maybe two, but usually its only one!