My New Trainer

Name:Lonnie Ellis

Age:10

Gender: Male

Description:4 foot 9 in. tall. Clothes:Jacket and a gray scarf with white tee under and regular pants. Accessorizes: Gold-platted watch (left arm), diamond earring, and hat. Hair:Fresh cut. Eyes:Brown.

History:Lonnie's real hometown was New Bark Town but at the age of seven him and his mom moved to Pallet Town. When he moved to Pallet Town him and Prof.Oak became good friends. Prof.Oak had a weak Pikachu that Lonnie played every time he would go to the lab.On Lonnie's 10th birthday Prof.Oak gave the Pikachu to Lonnie.Lonnie nicknamed him Sparky.

Hometown:New Bark Town Current Town:Pallet Town

Personality:Playful and childish but is serious in Pokemon battles.

Pokemon Team: Starter: Pikachu(Sparky lv.5 Male)

Welcome newcomer i hope you have looked at all of the rules old and revised as well as the template for the character application in which you had just filled out. There is a few things in which i would like to focus on for one thing your application is good, but it could be better. If you would go check out other applications that have made it here successfully, but please make your application a little different and originaal to yourself and how you roleplay. Also you need to be more specific and descriptive in your application as well as having creativity and a good imagination. If you would please edit your application after reading the rules all of them throughly as well as looking at successfully accepted applications to get a feel of what we are expecting out of new trainers to the site!

Regards...
LAZERUS
Co-Owner

Is this ok?

For now just put your starter and I can't guarantee that you will be able to get the other pokemon which you want, but you need to choose! Also your description looks good, but it would be better if in long sentences as in a book how they describe a new character in the story that is what we are looking for.
Lazerus