kufi
Team Silver Spark Leader
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Join date : 2010-08-12
 | Subject: trainer:Danny  Mon Sep 27, 2010 2:26 pm | |
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Character Application
Name: Danny
Age: (10- 16)14
Gender: (Male or Female)Male
Description:Danny is kind of short, about 5'1. He is also kind of skinny, weighing 98 pounds. His hair is really really dark black. Danny is kind of lonely and is usually very sad. This is because his parents died and he still hasn't gotten over it.Ever since there death,he swore never to love anything ever again because someday it will just leave you. However, then he came across a skarmory egg. He hatched and trained it and Danny loves it more then the world.
Hometown: Pallet town
history is optionol so i won't do it.
personality: as said earlier, he is kind of goth, but he doesn't whiten is face and stuff, he just has a dark personality. He is kind of shy and is longing for a friend.
Pokemon team:Skarmory, around lv 17, knows whirlwind steel wing drill peck and iron defense
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Last edited by kufi on Wed Sep 29, 2010 6:49 pm; edited 1 time in total | |
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kufi
Team Silver Spark Leader
Posts : 23
Join date : 2010-08-12
| | Subject: Re: trainer:Danny Mon Sep 27, 2010 2:43 pm | |
| btw if anybody wants to journey with me(which i would luv) please say it NOW and if u don't skarmory and i will destroy you. | |
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charizardmew
Team Silver Spark Leader
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Join date : 2010-09-28
Location : chicago
| | Subject: Re: trainer:Danny Tue Sep 28, 2010 9:32 pm | |
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kufi
Team Silver Spark Leader
Posts : 23
Join date : 2010-08-12
| | Subject: Re: trainer:Danny Wed Sep 29, 2010 5:05 am | |
| cool.
btw i think i know u are you _7erik88? | |
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Lazerus
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Age : 37
Location : Montana
| | Subject: Re: trainer:Danny Wed Sep 29, 2010 2:51 pm | |
| You need to describe what your character looks like in full detail in full sentences the description in which you have right now is more like a personality then a description. Look around at all the other app forms before you to get a sense of how the app is suppose to be and what is suppose to be put in a way. Hopefully it'll give you some clearity of how to fully fill out a successful application which will finally go through approval!
thanks
Lazerus
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Dwell solely ON the positive energy within your own self! | |
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kufi
Team Silver Spark Leader
Posts : 23
Join date : 2010-08-12
| | Subject: Re: trainer:Danny Wed Sep 29, 2010 6:50 pm | |
| edited.
kufi
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dwell only on the negative energy in yourself! | |
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Lazerus
Admin
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Join date : 2008-05-09
Age : 37
Location : Montana
| | Subject: Re: trainer:Danny Thu Sep 30, 2010 1:48 am | |
| I saw the edit and you still forgot what your character wears also if you are wanting the "Skarmory" you will need a backstory of how you and it came to meet which means you will have to do a History if you wish to have that as your reserved pokemon! +NEEDS EDITING+ | |
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