Thank you Diesle I was actually going to suggest the same thing, but more indepth! lol
Hello and welcome to the site by the way new member hope you have time to look at the site and read the rules new and old as well as the application guidelines for there are a few things that need to be edited. For example your description of your character needs to be more descriptive everything about her which means also what she wears and what it looks like and such.
Also your History needs to be longer and more descriptive especially wit hthe story of ho you met your pokemon it needs to be more detailed and descriptive you can use whatever you can just as long as you don't overstep your bounds! Also your Personality needs to be longer as well and all three of these needs to be full sentences about a line long!
Thanks
Lazerus
Co-Owner
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