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PostSubject: new trainer zack   new trainer zack Icon_minitimeTue Jul 27, 2010 1:06 am









Character Application

Name: Name of your character. zack
Age: 10
Gender: MALE

Description: Try your best to describe your character as best as you can don't forget to put the basics like: 5M tall,normal trainer gear, brown eyes,black hair,bag, and sneakers


Hometown: johto

History: when he was born years ago his mom did not want him so she chucked him away in route 29 then some pidgey looked after him when he was 9 he went back to new bark town to see his mom

Personality: he is always prepared for battle and is always confident

Pokemon Team: cyandaquil lv 5

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PostSubject: Re: new trainer zack   new trainer zack Icon_minitimeTue Jul 27, 2010 5:18 pm

DENIED!
You need to make a FULL application and you need to fill it out occuring to the guidelines and staying within the length that they say. Your Description, History, and Personality all need to be at LEAST a paragraph long and if you wish longer! If you are going to do a application take your time and fill it out as best and as descriptive and detailed as you can make it. Describe and fill it out as if you where going to fill it out for yourself what you look like (character) and what your background and all of that as if you where going to give it to an employer or to someone who doesn't know who you (character) looks like or even knows as if your going to tell a complete stranger about YOURSELF! You reserve the right to edit your application in time that it will be good enough to be accepted!
Thank you and good luck in the future!
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PostSubject: oh   new trainer zack Icon_minitimeWed Jul 28, 2010 10:03 am

ugh d I have to?
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PostSubject: Re: new trainer zack   new trainer zack Icon_minitimeMon Aug 02, 2010 11:29 pm

Yes if you want your character to be approved then you will need to make an actual application and make it have some sense in it! For you CANNOT roleplay UNTIL that character is approved so if you want to rp on this site you will need to make a sensable application and make it descriptive and detailed and you HAVE to be PATIENT and wait until it is approved before roleplaying!
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PostSubject: Character Application   new trainer zack Icon_minitimeTue Aug 03, 2010 2:28 am

Character Application

Name: Name of your character. zack
Age: 10
Gender: MALE

Description: 5M tall,normal trainer gear, brown eyes,black hair,bag, and sneakers


Hometown: sinnoh


History: when he was born years ago his mom did not want him so she chucked him away in route 201 then some bidoof looked after him when he was roundabout 10 he went back to twinleaf town to see his mom
Personality: he is always prepared for battle and is always confident

Pokemon Team: chimchar lv 5 ( HP 19) (MALE) new trainer zack Dpmfa390
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PostSubject: Re: new trainer zack   new trainer zack Icon_minitimeTue Aug 03, 2010 11:58 am

NEEDS EDITING!

This application isn't satisfactory and I am not approving any application that is all one liners and doesn't have any weight at all or any description at all. Everything needs to be MORE than one liner. Not to mention the History, Description, and Personality need to all be full sentences and descriptive, detailed, and at least a paragraph long with full complete sentences!
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PostSubject: ok,...   new trainer zack Icon_minitimeWed Aug 04, 2010 1:10 am

can i keep chimchar???
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PostSubject: Re: new trainer zack   new trainer zack Icon_minitimeWed Aug 04, 2010 5:01 pm

If you fill it out right. Redo it. You can ask for the chimchar. In a filled app.
Thanks.
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PostSubject: Re: new trainer zack   new trainer zack Icon_minitimeFri Aug 13, 2010 11:58 am

um why don't you try adding what happens AFTER he meets his mom in twin leaf town. try describing how long his hair is and what color his bag is, etc.


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