new trainer cameron

Name: Cameron Ragland

Age: 10

Gender: Male

Description: 5ft 2in long brown curly hair that covers his green eyes. a shirt with an empoleon on it. And a hat with a c written in old english written on the front worn backward.

Hometown: Pallet Town

History: Cameron had left his house holding a pokeball that he kept with him for good luck but never thought he'd use it to catch anything but this was different. He was 10 going to receive his pokemon license. When a piplup leap't out of a bush using bubble beam on him. Then cameron got knocked down. When he got up the pokemon used tackle on him. Then he remembered the pokeball in his hand he threw at the pokemon infront of him it shook once then twice then 3 times then the ball stopped he pick it up and thought wow my first pokemon. He kept walking and got his license, and pokedex and when the professor asked him what pokemon he wanted he said he'd caught one with his luckey pokeball

Personality: sensitive easily angered loving caring resenting many things can be depressed sometimes but others he is very up-beat

Pokemon Team: Piplup

Hello and welcome to the site!

Please make sure that you add as much detail as you can to your post please.

am i acepted

No he just meant you need to add more detail for this to be accepted.

i added as much detail as i possibly could

Hello just looked at your app again and saw that your personality was still a one-liner could you please expand on your characters' personality more fully so it is not a one-liner? Also you need to make them full and complete sentences and not minor things if you could put your application into full complete and descriptive sentences about your character and make it clear of what and who your character is which as much visualizing as you can.
Thanks
Lazerus
Co-Owner
Always Dwell ON the Positive Energy within your very self!

how about now

am i accepted i i did as best as i could