hey new char

vyse · Newbie Posts: 14 Join date: 2009-09-18

Name: vyse

Age: 14

Gender: male

Description: black hair which spikes in random places (rather like soras from kh) blue eyes a sign on his forehead that signifies trust and very tall

Hometown: azeallea town moved to pallet town

History: vyse was lonely as he was born with a strange birthmark that signified trusts ironically nobody trusted him because of this so he was outcasted and ran away (his parents even outcasted him!) on his way to a new place to live he met up with totodile who was being bullied by a band of chikoritas vyse protected him and the two made a friendship after wandering aimlessly they managed to stow away on a ship and woke up with the cargo dumped in pallet town with proffesor oak staring down at him wide eyed

Personality: slightly shy at first but as you get to know him you find his trully amazing personality he also doesnt back down if theres a good spot for a inuendo

Pokemon Team: totodile
attacks:scratch, leer
hp:50
Attack: 65
Defense: 64
Special Attack: 44
Special Defense: 48
Speed: 43
this is taken from gbc games gold and silver

vyse · Newbie Posts: 14 Join date: 2009-09-18

can someone reply plz why are the admins never on for gods sake i mean plz dudes plzzzzz reply and la cherie or watever u are so lucky they got 2 u b4 me lol!

Lazerus · Subject: Re: hey new char Tue Sep 22, 2009 1:02 am

Sorry about not gettingto it the other admin hasn't ben on very long (which she needs to start) but there are a few thins that you need to do. For instance howdid you come into contact or in possesion ofthe Totodile. Also lengthen the history that way. Also the personality a little longer as well. So If you would please do taht thanks adn I'll make sureto look at it later!
LAZERUS

vyse · Newbie Posts: 14 Join date: 2009-09-18

vyse wrote:

Name: vyse

Age: 14

Gender: male

Description: black hair which spikes in random places (rather like soras from kh) blue eyes a sign on his forehead that signifies trust and very tall

Hometown: azeallea town moved to pallet town

History: vyse was lonely as he was born with a strange birthmark that signified trusts ironically nobody trusted him because of this so he was outcasted and ran away (his parents even outcasted him!) on his way to a new place to live he met up with totodile who was being bullied by a band of chikoritas vyse protected him and the two made a friendship which would never break totodile kept following vyse afterwards and popping out of his pokeball after wandering aimlessly they managed to stow away on a ship and woke up with the cargo dumped in pallet town with proffesor oak staring down at him wide eyed

Personality: not shy in the least bit always out for a laugh loud flamboyant funny etc etc but ever since his encounter with totodile these characteristics which were already on the peak of explosiveness increased dramatically known as the king of a party he will never back down if theres a good spot for a inuendo

Pokemon Team: totodile
attacks:scratch, leer
hp:50
Attack: 65
Defense: 64
Special Attack: 44
Special Defense: 48
Speed: 43
this is taken from gbc games gold and silver

is that a bit better?

Lazerus · Subject: Re: hey new char Tue Sep 22, 2009 6:00 pm

Better and....

ACCEPTED!

vyse · Newbie Posts: 14 Join date: 2009-09-18

tyvm thank you very much finally i can rp on this forum XD